Mail Art: Huxley Story Revisions

In 2000, I wrote an improvised short short story (i.e., I wrote without consciously thinking about what I would write). The results were... not good. But a text can be reshaped, and I asked for volunteers on the FluxList to modify my story and send it to another FluxList member. 5 brave souls took up the challenge. My orignal (and only) text is what is marked out on the first entry.